Hi and welcome back to my blog. this week I have story to show you. This week I have added three challenges with the help of my teacher Mrs Carney. Let's take a look at my writing
Bao
Chunk 9
Adverbs - ly
Feelings - negative and positive
Precise verb - Action
By Mia
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Mum lay curled up sadly crying and sniffling softly to herself with her back turned to the door. Her son walked into her room and sat down on the bed with a bright pink box. As he turned to go, Mum pinched and grabbed hold of him and he looked back into his mum’s eyes that looked as sad as ever. Mum got up and crawled over the bed to sit with her son. The boy handed her a bread treat. The pair sat together. Mum’s head rested on her son’s shoulder. Suddenly the curtains began to sway.
A few days later …
There was all the family including the girl that the bao bun was dating. They were all around the table making bao buns when the girl had made three buns, Mum and her son gazed open mouthed at them.
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