Hello and welcome back to my blog this week I did a biteable about how to write a good blog comment. 

 Hello and today I have some reading to show you so lets take a  look

 

bao bun

 Hi and welcome back to my blog. this week I have story to show you. This week I have added three challenges with the help of my teacher Mrs Carney. Let's take a look at my writing

                                                                                 Bao

Chunk 9

Adverbs - ly

Feelings - negative and positive  

Precise verb - Action

By Mia

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Mum lay curled up sadly crying and sniffling  softly to herself with her  back turned to the door. Her son walked into her room and sat down on the bed with a bright pink box. As he turned to go, Mum pinched and grabbed hold of him and he looked back into his mum’s eyes that looked as sad as ever. Mum got up and crawled over the bed to sit with her son. The boy handed her a bread treat. The pair sat together. Mum’s head rested on her son’s shoulder. Suddenly the curtains began to sway.

A few days later …

There was all the family including the girl that the bao bun was dating. They were all around the table making bao buns when the girl had made three buns, Mum and her son gazed open mouthed at them.

The end