Making up strange words

I made  up some words like Roald Dahl

Story recount

I did this recount about a book called Zerelda's horse

Title: Zerelda’s horse’s.       Author:Margaret Mahy

Start of the book: Zerelda was going around town in a carriage with a horse pulling them along with  tourist’s 

Looking at load of important people.

 the end of the book:Hippo was a human with disability,

Then Hippo turned into a beautiful  shimmering horse.

 hippo was from another planet.Zerelda was extremely interested in this because she loved horse’s.